Grab a bowl

I’ll be posting another excerpt from Porridge tonight and I’d really love some feedback on the writing. 

I wrote this excerpt last night in a different style with more metaphors.

I really couldn’t articulate my feelings well enough for it to be simple.

I hope you enjoy it.

Here’s a list of the other excerpts if you’ve missed them: RailingsDominoes and Destiny

l/r

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